Narratives

Hi there!

Today I have two narratives to show you that I did last week in school. One is wrote with a classmate and it's invented and the other I wrote it myself and it's a real experience. The blue words/phrases are narrative time expressions.

Narrative 1

The Rollercoaster

an interesting experience

I think one of the worst experiences of my life was when we were on top of a rollercoaster and it stopped.

Two friends, Joel and Giovanna, and I wanted to go on holiday together. We decided to go to PortAventura for the weekend. We took the bus at Girona's station at six o'clock on Friday. We arrived two hours later. We were so excited. We thought it would be a good day. Next day we woke up and went to have a breakfast. First we went to China to see a show. We really liked it. Next we went to Mexico, and later to China again.

We were really excited about going to Shambala, the tallest rollercoaster in Europe. When we were on the top of the rollercoaster, it stopped! We were really scared, screaming and with a lot of panic! Finally a few men fixed the rollercoaster. I have to say I didn't enjoy the ride at all!

A good day became the worst day of our life! We went home with the fear inside our bodies.

Narrative 2

An Experience Under the Rain

an adventure

A few years ago, I think I was nine or ten years old, i went to a friend's house. We were my sister, four friends and I, and we decided to go to explore the forest which was near the house.

We took our bicycles and cycled to the forest. We were riding into the forest going nowhere, feeling excited and feeling like a group of teenagers, like those who are on films and series.

We looked up in the sky and it was very dar. It was going to rain. A few moments later it started raining. We continued riding our bicycles, and then we found a little house and we wanted to enter because it was abandoned. one of us, I can't remember who, entered and ran out very fast. We saw what was inside. Very enormous rats! We took our bicycles and rode so fast.

Some minutes later we didn't know where to go. We were lost in the forest under the rain! We felt very anxious and with panic. We didn't know what to do.

Later one of us proposed to say out loud if we remembered the trees or something. In the end we found our friend's house after a long time lost in the forest. We ere punished by our respective parents.